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I lay down in my tent, usually at this time I would think about my brother, Itachi. But not to night, I couldn't believe Suigetsu and Sakura were... were a couple!

"Suigetsu?" A sweet voice interupted my thoughts. "I had a nightmare, can I sleep with you?" Suigetsu asked playfully.
"But, arn't you supposed to be on watch?" (How can you have a nightmare when your awake)
"That can wait"


"I'm not going to be your girlfriend if your not going to do your duties!" she shouted

I smiked

"Sakura-aishiteru! I'm s-so sorry! OWWW!" he winced (Poor Suigetsu)

I heard heavy footsteps rush out of Sakura's tent (Well Suigetsu's tent but he's supposed to be on watch) and assumed it was Suigetsu.

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Sakura was putting away the leftovers incase we needed it for the trip (OMG they didn't have lunch or dinner yesterday... lets pretend they did). While Karin washed the bowls (they ate with their hands) and Suigetsu, Juugo and I packed up the tents.

"Hey Sakura-aishiteru, I'm all done with the tents need a hand?" Suigtsu asked Sakura. Sakura mumbled something before walking away with the packed up food. Suigetsu gave out an unhappy groan "She's still angry at me..." he lamented.

Soon Karin came back with the bowls. "Urh, I didn't get any sleep last night cause of Sakura-ama's snoring!" she groaned. "She wasn't snoring she was shouting" Juugo stated "Well I can't tell the difference because her voice sounds horrible!!" she raged rudely. Suigetsu just sighed and gazed at Sakura.

"Lets go" I ordered simply

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"So where are we going Sasuke-kun?" Karin questioned. "We are going to a town called Misato" I answered.

We travelled for another half hour. "Sasuuuuke-kun!" Karin whined "My legs hurt can you carry me?" "No." I replied

One Hour Later

"Sasuke-kun, are we there yet?" (Yes Karin asked)

One Minute Later

"Are we there yet Sasuke-kun?" (Karin again)

15 Seconds Later

"How about now?" (Karin)

"NO!" I shouted hoping that she would shut up!

1 Minute Later

"Sasuke are we there?"

I was about to start shouting and cursing until I relised that we were there and that Sakura was the one that had asked.
"Yes" I replied

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I just paid for 3 rooms in the motel, one room with a double bed and the other two with two king size beds. The room with the double bed was for Juugo since he was so big. I shared a room with Sakura, since I didn't want to be raped by Karin nor did I want Sakura to break every bone and Suigetsu's body.

I lay on my bed while Sakura stood on the small balcony. "Sakura, you should really get some sleep" I insisted "Um, can I just see Suigetsu for a minute first" Sakura asked "Hn" I replied.

So Sakura exited the room. As I heard her open the door to Suigetsu and Karin's room I decided to listen to their conversation (the rooms were next door to eachother) so I put my left ear against the wall.

"What do you want Sakura-ama!" Karin rudely questioned "To talk to Suigetsu-san" she replied "Sakura-chan I'm really sorry about last night! I jus-" Suigetsu was interupted by Sakura's sweet voice "It's okay, your forgiven... but"
"But what?"
"Can we just be friends now"
"Y-yeah sure" Suigetsu sounded somewhat upset

Soon Sakura came back into our room and took her coat off and slipped into her bed as I turned the lamp off.
Kay lots of people on say they want some SuiKari so yeah, I'm gonna put some SuiKari in this Fanfic
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nommykinz Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Artist
NOOO ): just so a suisakusasu ;w;
emosakura3 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
love it
ZukoAdmirer Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
azulalover426 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010
awww no pff suikaari sucks but do what YOU wanna do sasusakusai it pretty cool and sasusaku rocks
ZukoAdmirer Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks~!
Sakura1518 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
is chpt 8 up yet??? XD
ZukoAdmirer Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No i'm sorry, but I've atarted writing it it's just that I'm really busy and I've got writers block
Sakura1518 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010
XD ok.
ZukoAdmirer Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
But hopefully it well be ready soon!
Sakura1518 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2010
'kay XD
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